I was gonna post this on Congress's website, but they're like...9 DOLLAH PLZ B4 U POST IT!!!11 so I typed it all out for nothing...Could you see if anything is wrong with it? (grammar, spelling, personal bias, hints of my age, etc.)

HERE IT G0EZ

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Paper to Congress CNC00.txt (1.9 KB, 80 views)

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We view ourselves on the eve of battle. We are nerved for the contest, and must conquer or perish. It is vain to look for present aid. We must now act or abandon all hope! Rally to the standard, and be no longer the scoff of mercenary tongues! Be men, be free men, that your children may bless their father's name. - Sam Houston

Duty is the most sublime word in our language. Do your duty in all things. You cannot do more. You should never wish to do less. - Robert E. Lee

soon as it comes through the pending thing I will read it.

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Land before Time- Ducky- Yup Yup Yup -

Me too pal...

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"Barrel High, Powder Dry!"

"Illic est haud effrego ex Veneratio"

It has to go through pending?

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We view ourselves on the eve of battle. We are nerved for the contest, and must conquer or perish. It is vain to look for present aid. We must now act or abandon all hope! Rally to the standard, and be no longer the scoff of mercenary tongues! Be men, be free men, that your children may bless their father's name. - Sam Houston

Duty is the most sublime word in our language. Do your duty in all things. You cannot do more. You should never wish to do less. - Robert E. Lee

yup our own little red tape LOL

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"For those who have fought for it, freedom has a flavor the protected shall never know.."

There are still pending images from October of 05. Good luck with getting that paper through.

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I will go through and look and check the pending stuff. I have read your essay and I like it. I would however think about your wording in the first paragraph. It reads like "thousands of Americans flood across our borders." I would write it as thousands of illegal aliens flood across our borders. Other wise the subject matter is going to be confused.

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"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe." -Albert Einstein

"Damn the torpedoes! Full speed ahead!" -Admiral David Farragut

Definately, If they were American, they would be legal, and there would be no problem.

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Have a look boys. I have approved the document and you can now read it. I recommend opening it with word.

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"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe." -Albert Einstein

"Damn the torpedoes! Full speed ahead!" -Admiral David Farragut

I would take out the whole “national Identity” tidbit, seems a bit biggoted. American was built on the sweat and tears of Immigrants. Immigration is good when it’s legal and the employers are required to pay minimum wage. That allows Americans to compete for those jobs, because currently, An American, who is required by law to be paid minimum, can’t compete with an Immigrant who will work for $2.50 an hour. Making the legal process easier to navigate will make sure that these workers pay social security and taxes. We can’t however, have 5 million come in a year as that would over crowd urban areas.

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